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Comments of chapter undefined of MHA: Minor Quirk System ( almost having no quirk)

FujiCigarette
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Continuity is too confusing.. its just one scene from the next.. i cant even picture the scene happening...

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Finikkin
FinikkinLv13Finikkin

Your underestimating the skill of complete body control. You can control your hormone glands, your blood pressure, ur circadian rythym. All the unconscious actions of ur body can be controlled. If u want to grow muscle mass the mc can increase the amount of testosterone being produced or something else. Not to memtion the unbelievable degree of flexibility you’d gain by having complete control of ur body. There is a lot of potential with this skill and I hope u dont run if into the ground, great story so far and keep up the great work.

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Bibbylon
BibbylonLv11Bibbylon

Awesome fanfic. Really like the concept! Keep up the great working, really looking forward to the next chapter!!

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MegaMacho
MegaMachoLv6MegaMacho

Author, just wanted to say you writing improved a lot from chapter 1 until now, even paragraph spacing and the system prompts became more organized. Awesome work! :D

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ZoneTail
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Daoistgb9zqP
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Lo siento no hablo ingles pero con control corporal puede hacer las técnicas de los zoldick como afilar sus uñas o dislocarse las extremidades para escapar de las ataduras.

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THE_OG
THE_OGLv4THE_OG

Btw whenever you type all might you should put space in between his name since his name isn’t one word and you messed on the part where the system was apparently bring Oki back to reality you should have put [ You will now return to your own reality] and I have a question reguarding that since you never real went about how he ended up where he ended up to somehow return to his reality. I can understand if the system had paused everything around him except him but him returning to his own reality via no explanation as to how he got out of it in the first place confused me tbh.

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THE_OG
THE_OGLv4THE_OG

Please give the system a voice and make it have an attitude sometimes it would be funny

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Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanks

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JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4JapaOuO

Author wait until tomorrow I'll vote for your Fan Fiction

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JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4JapaOuO

Dude I liked the concept of your Fan Fiction

Matthew_Keen
Matthew_KeenLv4Matthew_Keen

nice.

DaoistFbOtWp
DaoistFbOtWpLv1DaoistFbOtWp

Я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я я. Автор ты местоимённый террарист

LordAinzSama
LordAinzSamaLv5LordAinzSama

mfw the domain (byakugan like ability) is not chosen

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍