Comments of chapter undefined of MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
Raj_Shah_7152
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I liked the burn.especially complan joke..indians will no it . But on a serious note i really dont think advani clan will let this go..they would probably find out his identity at all cost after all the stocks crashed by 30 percent ..and kidnap his little brother and make him a slave threatening to kill his parents using police torture or something ..let see Although i do admit i like the slow comedy in this novel it is refreshing..but life is not so easy my friend #just some random thoughts
Hey man, I'm really liking the story. The plot is an uncut diamond, however you must know how to cut it, otherwise you won't get anywhere... For starters, you should use more commas, they are severely lacking. Then you should use full stops at the end of your sentences as well as capital letters at the start (not after commas). You should also watch where you use spaces (like you shouldn't use them before commas or after you start quoting). Lastly you might want to use something that difereciates thoughts from narration, that would be helpful. Thank you for all the hard work and I hope that you succeed in all your endeavours! đđȘ
thank you for the chapter. while I was reading there were some words that needed to be fixed. one of them was when it was saying that memes were being made of the Avani heir, it was spelled "meme s" when it should all be one word I'm pretty sure this was accident but you might want to go through the whole chapter just to make sure.
