Comments of chapter undefined of I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.

I think the pace was fine... like yeah no one can predict death! This chapter was full of emotions😇

The pacing is good and maintained well.

It's a good chapter, but you can work on reducing your quick pace change. I like that he had a rather good emotional turmoil that could be attributed to the mess and clutter of information and his parent in this world dying, but the change is way too quick for me.