Gonshido
This chapter really makes me wanna drop it.. not because of the story.. just the way you write it. Some authors write in a way that has a little bit of foreshadowing thats not noticeable, something very subtle. but with your writing style that is quick and to the point(which isn't bad) it just doesnt subconsciously prepare anyone for an acceptable twist.. that it just leaves me hanging with a weird sense of disappointment.