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I hate this story, let's be honest, if you found out your newborn child was possessed by the soul of an adult, you would throw it in a river, I would. There is no way anyone would be that sympathetic, especially since the "child" killed your daughter. But I can't give you a bad grade, I don't like what you did, but that doesn't mean it's a bad story. Thanks for the chapters
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If this is your first ff, I am not gonna believe you. You just showed the bond between a grandfather and grandson which can't be received later they pass away and the time spent together and I believe many cried at the chapter 16. I respect you from my heart and thank you for reminding the time I spent with my grandfather.
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Let's just say this is very interesting fanfic with a unique mc, the character portrayal is kind of confusing as his goals are not clear like he says he wishes to have a lazy life then why he is opting for the position of the clan leader, The position of clan leader is not a joke you can't just take it for your advantage and throw it after you use it(well you can do that but it requires certain scenarios like #ruthless mc, # anti hero, etc related to an evil plotline), so this whole thing made his character demented and unreadable. See I am not saying that this fic is bad or something in fact what I say is this is good but could have been much better with a comprehensible mc well that's all I have to say and lastly read the fic, If you are someone who regularly reads naruto fic then you will find it quite interesting for a change(the last line is for veteran readers) and nothing much to say I shall end my boring and brooding review and
Its been a long time since I've written a review but I chose to write one for this because it has a lot of potential !!! I usually just leave a few comments after a chapter but this story is a well balanced fic with emotions being pretty well portrayed...So give this one a read without fail and PLEASE DO NOT DROP THIS FIC RIKLENT SAMA !!!