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Comments of chapter undefined of Dungeons Online

Nimblegalaxy
NimblegalaxyLv4Nimblegalaxy

sorry for the comment in the earlier chapter while the theme was the similar ,story is different and again sorry for the earlier comment

JustinD
JustinDLv15JustinD

Dropped this novel trash really got my hopes up author made it out like its a Gem

Master_AJJ_Montage
Master_AJJ_MontageLv4Master_AJJ_Montage

maybe it gets good later, but the start is really bad. The lack of expository is fine if there is something else that keeps viewers hooked, a major event of sorts. like a major scheme mc gets caught up in, maybe revenge or even an epic fight or rivalry(anything noteworthy). but it seems like just nothing much. even if the challenge is something major, due to the nature of the event, we know nothing about it, and as such, it has no impact. humans dislike the unknown, so how do you get them motivated to continue something where they know nothing? simply really, just stir up one of their fatal flaws, curiosity. (well I said simple, but it's not.) so far this novel doesn't do that so only people who want to persevere or have nothing better to do would continue.

EsZeus
EsZeusLv15EsZeus

What the heck do I read here? It feels like you missed the whole story before that already and gets thrown into the middle or end of the story

Shaggnasty
ShaggnastyLv14Shaggnasty

What an odd start to this novel. Maybe we will understand wth is going on at some point.