MotivatedSloth
maybe it gets good later, but the start is really bad. The lack of expository is fine if there is something else that keeps viewers hooked, a major event of sorts. like a major scheme mc gets caught up in, maybe revenge or even an epic fight or rivalry(anything noteworthy). but it seems like just nothing much. even if the challenge is something major, due to the nature of the event, we know nothing about it, and as such, it has no impact. humans dislike the unknown, so how do you get them motivated to continue something where they know nothing? simply really, just stir up one of their fatal flaws, curiosity. (well I said simple, but it's not.) so far this novel doesn't do that so only people who want to persevere or have nothing better to do would continue.