Comments of chapter undefined of Heart of Darkness

I wonder if Rayven or Skender have noticed her missing? I mean I know Rayven saw her leaving but do they notice her gone from the town? I hope she remembers what her brother said about how only a monster can save her from other monsters. She needs to run to Rayven before she is forced to do something she really does not want to do. I do hope she finds an opportunity to get out soon. If I remember correctly she is climbing the cliff towards his castle at night so maybe soon she is able to slip out before she starts working. Or she might work some but realize she needs to escape when the customers start wanting more from her. How I wish Rayven would learn about what has happened to her and save her but I am certain it takes her going to him for him to save her.

Shes marked now and cant even escape😭so how does she run away to Rayvens castle?? Gah just going to get worse for her😔I hope William is at least alittle bit better off

So how does she escape then? How much more awful things need to happen to her before she flees to Rayven’s home?

So... I've commented enough about how terrible her situation is. And how I believe it will develop. Not that I know. Just that I think that when it comes to the point where she's truly faced with the reality of being a prostitute, not the dressing part, she'll know that she just can't take it. We all know that one thing is pondering, projecting and trying to imagine horrible things and another is being in the midst of them. I believe she keeps saying " I don't want this" as if anyone cared for what she wants instead of " I can't do this" which is more like it. She just can't. She won't be able to take it, and thats when she'll ran thinking she rather take her chances and die than be put through that. Moving on, I'm also curious. Will she find Sir Shaw here? He'd be delighted, I'm sure. And maybe Lazarus too? Maybe he'll help her? I kind of really wanna kill Rayven right now. I mean, I know processes can't be forced and he's struggling but... God is he gonna feel guilty later on. And he should 😒. I'm betting he's gone to Luciana to try to get her to kill him . This makes me wonder about time which I gotta say, in these stories is a bit hazy. How long was she at Natasha's? 2 days, 3? and then at Mr Green's house? what, a week? ( She really must be a genius to learn to milk a cow and fetch eggs and wash and fold and cook and clean in such a short time considering she had never done anything of the sort before 😳🤣) Anyway, she's now been at the brothel for what, a day and a half? So, what happened to Rayven and the others in all these days, at least 10? I would really like to know what they're up to.

this was so hard to read. and why she is considering doing this job and thinks she can pay the debt and even save money? did she finally go insane? please fight Angelica anything is better than this. i hope someone saves her before it's too late

I hate this!!! Things have to get better soon….hopefully before she gets violated.

I really hope she doesnt get raped. Maybe a scuffle will happen with a gaurd and her and she’ll end up killing him and running off to the cursed castle??? 🤞🏼

This is horrible and it seems like Angelica is trying to convince herself to accept her fate since every other option now seems impossible with her being branded. But I feel like she is going to change her mind later and escape. We know after all she is going to escape. Maybe something will trigger her and make her come up with a reason to escape. She said in the prologue that she wondered of lord Rayven will accept her offer. I wonder what that offer is. She definitely thought of something

Oh my gosh poor angelica. I Just want to cry for her.

Does anyone else seriously check the app for updates like fifty times a day? I am so thankful for the author and all her hardwork, but I also need the opening scene to be here like tomorrow 😅

Lawddd!!! somebody come save her!!! She better escape before she has to do something strange for a piece of change! It's sad that she's marked now. she's already bullied and ostracized now, it'll only get worse from here. William I hope he's doing better but I can only imagine. I bet he has it tough as well,but probably not as bad as Angelica who is now a prostitute. Someone please notice she's missing! I bet this dude is lying about her dad owing him money. He probably does this to a lot of people once someone has passed swoop in and say oh you don't know me but your family member owes me lots of money so you have to pay it back. If Angelica was smart she should of said oh you'll have to take that up with my dad since that was his debt not mine.

This story is so depressing When does it get better or does it even get happier at all?

I think I’d rather choose death if it would not be for William... What a horrible life she ended up having...🤭

Need more Completely hooked

Uhhhhhhhh!

I hope she doesn’t get taken advatage of and will escape before the deed happens. I am anticipating for the time she makes it to Rayven’s castle! This is so horrible. What makes it worst is that this kind of situations are true stories for many people 😭😭‼️ I hope she will be saved but we’ll just have to wait what dearest Jasmine writes. Thanks for the 2 chapters.💖❣️🥰

This is how I’m feeling

A feel like fainting After reading this . Who can help her please a dont want her to be used 😭. She shouldnt give a stuff about what her father owes.

Please someone help her