this is one good start I'll say, needs a little editing though but it's great.
it had my attention the whole time as I read, and also the last paragraph complete compelled to read further well done đ
A good chap to colour the character and foreshadowing what's to come. I personally like to kick door, too. If only I have more money to buy more doors...
well the mc is shown to be arrogant and is picky, he is also restless for the case, thought his boss and uncle doesn't want to hand it over ot him but finally agrees to it.
