VAGRANT

The author does a good job at explaining the entire setting of the novel via the protagonist's narration. The first chapter in particular opens up with the protagonist telling us, the readers, about this large and threatening desert world. It was straightforward, but it was more than enough for me to imagine this setting overall. The setting is probably the strongest aspect of this book from what I've read so far, in addition to the storytelling itself. In addition, direction is also clear along with the novel's characters. Again, the presentation is straightforward but in a good way, it tells you the overall basis of the protagonist and further details about his character would be told later on. My only criticism of this book is the fact that it has giant paragraphs in some chapters. The content itself is fine, but it seemed like a wall of text. While I can excuse it, I would strongly suggest the author to provide more spaces for the paragraphs, so it may be easier to read for mobile readers. Looking forward to seeing more of this book. Good job to the author.

Hey! Your story was such a cozy emotional ride, I loved how it made me feel like I was right there with the characters. I’m an artist who turns stories into comics, and I could instantly picture yours in panels. Would love to talk more if you’re up for it! Discord: (minakn0ws) Mina