Comments of chapter undefined of Blood Elf Monarch

I dont want to seem like im nit-picking as this story has had a pretty good start. One thing I would mention, though, is the awkward sentence construction. You dont need to start almost every paragraph with “Tristan……”. Also, some sentences could be combined and split up for much better readability. Flow of the story gets thrown off by these little things that are repeated. Keep up the great work otherwise! 👌