I was a little confused about some of the characters while you were introducing them. Even though you said that Maple was the groom's twin sister, you made her out to be manly and I think you might have even referred to her as "him" once.
I like so far but I got so lost is maple a twin sister or twin brother is he a girl or a boy I don't I read it three times I can't figure it out maybe it'll become clear in the next chapter