Comments of chapter undefined of Master of Voracious Beasts

Okay! I struggled to find a way to leave a review. I apologize so ill have to settle for a review. The story is good but I got lost and confused at certain points. One thing about readers too much information makes them lose their attraction to the book. There's a common saying, "Show, don't tell." you need to be able to show the readers not just tell them. They'll become restless and stop reading. I zoned out for a bit when I continued reading then had to stop my music and get back into it. It's good stuff but don't make it easy for us to be easily distracted.