Comments of chapter undefined of Not Your Typical Villianess

Well written 👏

the story is very good. lot of surprise... need more edit about the typos. waiting more to come thank you author...

the story is good.love this couple.

your story is really good. the plot is so nice. but you can improve your book by fixing the spelling error and grammar so that readers can understand more. the ending is a bit rush maybe you can change it a little bit, put a situation where yaozhu talk with liya and chap about how their son felt after his parents died in third pov. in that chapter you can tell when yaozhu and liya died and so on. i hope what i commented does not hurt you in any way. this is just my opinion and suggestions, you want to accept it or not, it it is your choice. also can i wish for bonus chapters for yaozhu and liya? pretty please? i need more of their interactions

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i can’t use fast pass to unlock the side stories?