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Nas_Sy

Nas_Sy

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2021-01-31 JoinedGlobal
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  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy1yr
    Commented

    If you're not feeling well, you should take a break. Your health is really important. Thank you for writing this lovely story 💕

    Ch 298 The Boy In Yellow
    altalt
    For Our Happier Path
    Urban · hansora
    detail
  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy1yr
    Replied to MITCHIEWilliams

    hi! will be checking out the book later, does it connected with this book or not?

    Ch 257 Emperor Lu
    altalt
    Not Your Typical Villianess
    History · MITCHIEWilliams
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  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy1yr
    Replied to MITCHIEWilliams

    I'm looking forward to your updates ♥️

    Ch 257 Emperor Lu
    altalt
    Not Your Typical Villianess
    History · MITCHIEWilliams
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  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy1yr
    Commented

    your story is really good. the plot is so nice. but you can improve your book by fixing the spelling error and grammar so that readers can understand more. the ending is a bit rush maybe you can change it a little bit, put a situation where yaozhu talk with liya and chap about how their son felt after his parents died in third pov. in that chapter you can tell when yaozhu and liya died and so on. i hope what i commented does not hurt you in any way. this is just my opinion and suggestions, you want to accept it or not, it it is your choice. also can i wish for bonus chapters for yaozhu and liya? pretty please? i need more of their interactions

    Ch 257 Emperor Lu
    altalt
    Not Your Typical Villianess
    History · MITCHIEWilliams
    detail
  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy2yr
    Commented

    thank you for the double updates💕

    Ch 138 A missed opportunity 3
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    Not Your Typical Villianess
    History · MITCHIEWilliams
    detail
  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy2yr
    Replied to MITCHIEWilliams
    Ch 110 Allies or Enemies 5
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    Not Your Typical Villianess
    History · MITCHIEWilliams
    detail
  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy2yr
    Commented

    can you do double update? btw your story is awesome!!

    Ch 110 Allies or Enemies 5
    altalt
    Not Your Typical Villianess
    History · MITCHIEWilliams
    detail
  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy2yr
    Commented

    looks like the Ah's is making a move 🙄🙄

    Ch 100 Small Province big problems 2
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    Not Your Typical Villianess
    History · MITCHIEWilliams
    detail
  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy2yr
    Commented

    if he reborn, then can he reborn before she died? it's so sad😭😭

    Ch 31 She Never Smiled
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    His Rui
    History · Ada_5253
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  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy2yr
    Commented

    love this😍😍

    Ch 18 Young Master He Jian
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    CEO He : Please Don't Love Me
    Urban · Ada_5253
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  • Nas_Sy
    Nas_Sy2yr
    Commented

    I'm here from wattpad 😘

    Ch 21 The Long Night
    altalt
    His Rui
    History · Ada_5253
    detail