Comments of chapter undefined of Not Your Typical Villianess
Not Your Typical Villianess
MITCHIEWilliams
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What about zhu Yingyin .. In the start the story is about liya and Yingyin.. .. . .. U didn't give any closure to yingjie and Ying yin story . .Did they have a boy are girl. . What about .. . .. Yazhou empress mother.. Did she live until to see her grandchild .. .. What about Yazhou Lu sister to whom did she married... And how the u Lu yong when and where. .And why. .. This are some of the lose ends which very much to tied for giving ur novel a proper closure. . .....i follow ur story from start. Every chapter of it.. And I very much njoy it. .When stop update for some time after coming to climax . .It's not problem for me bcoz u must want to it a proper closure but after reading ur finale I feel left hanging in the air... Feel incomplete about this abrupt end. So plzzzzzzzzzz take ur time but.. .Give it a clouser ... And how the hell liya Give birth to 8😵😵😵😵😵😵🙄🙄🙄🙄😰😰😰😌😌😌😌😌😌🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️Childerns.. .hoe author San .how. ..are they twis are what...
your story is really good. the plot is so nice. but you can improve your book by fixing the spelling error and grammar so that readers can understand more. the ending is a bit rush maybe you can change it a little bit, put a situation where yaozhu talk with liya and chap about how their son felt after his parents died in third pov. in that chapter you can tell when yaozhu and liya died and so on. i hope what i commented does not hurt you in any way. this is just my opinion and suggestions, you want to accept it or not, it it is your choice. also can i wish for bonus chapters for yaozhu and liya? pretty please? i need more of their interactions
