Debbiejay
I am giving five to this story because I simply love it. Wow! It was fun to read and the pace and dialogues were breathtaking. What about the character design, it was amazing. I will keep it for later. Why? Because it is wonderful and makes me to laugh, just like when I am watching some funny Japanese anime. Nice one author....
I read until ch.9 before it got locked, which in my opinion is too soon. Reading this novel, I felt like I went back in time to my teenage days. The style of writing is very similar to Western Wattpad stories. š¤ The MC is your average girl, I would dare say that she is easily relatable to most readers, that's if not for her very special background. Not gonna spoil that, though it would be revealed in early chapters.Ā Gabriella has this huge crush on the school's most handsome and richest boy in school. From his behavior he's not the biggest scum as they worked on a school assignment without any complications, ate a pizza, watched Mulan, so I don't understand why she has such a love-hate relationship with him. She hates anything that has to do with him, except his body. She never mentioned why she liked him, she only and always described his good looks. This would be the biggest minus from me. But she's a teenager, inexperienced, so, I'll forgive it. š„° The chapter lengths are perfect, the flow of the story is nice, not too fast nor too slow. The grammar wasn't jarring, I didn't have a need to edit every paragraph or stop myself from reading something twice. Everything was understandable, and the things Gabriel saw or felt were well described.
Okay so I am here for a review, firstly, start of the story is very cool and attention grasping. Secondly, I loved the story development, which keeps the readers on their toes for next chapters. Overall, it was a great read. This novel is landing straight into my library. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, AUTHOR !!
You had me at her being possessed and seeking vengeance. I love novels about people seeking revenge or vengeance. I couldn't read all the chapters tho cuz of time and I'm so occupied. However, the chapters that I did read were very interesting. Gabriella is a very interesting woman who's about to have a journey of a lifetime. I noticed that there's a few errors with your sentence construction so you should check that out. Overall, this novel has great potential and I'm definitely gonna stay tuned.
Absolute diamond in rough stone!Amazing writing and story telling by the author! The plot is unlike any other that I've seen. No cliche moment, addicting content, and a great book to spend your time on. Characters are so far relatable and lovable especially the main protagonist Grabiella. Author did a profound job on describing the world in this book with great extent for the ease of read for the readers. Kudos to the author![img=recommend][img=recommend]