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Comments of chapter undefined of Carefree Path of a Wondering Stranger

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Carefree Path of a Wondering Stranger

MasterBeast7016

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Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

Tried to read but I can't, please edit all the chapter to space the text more. Separate the Dialog from the paragraph to allow time to breath instead of packing everything. I'm sure it will be interesting but if the form isn't there, you lose most of the reader.

2yr
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MasterBeast7016
MasterBeast7016AuthorMasterBeast7016

I did fix it in later chapters. My apologies for the inconvenience.

2yr

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Psy_duck
Psy_duckLv4Psy_duck

great chap 👌

3yr
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TachibanaShiro
TachibanaShiroLv5TachibanaShiro

Tank yu. The Paragraphs are too T H I C C. Reduce it a little bit.

2yr
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Ozonelayer
OzonelayerLv14Ozonelayer

Yolo

2yr
Ferro
FerroLv5Ferro

Okay, how is this an "original" novel when is clearly a fanfiction? something is wrong here. There is nothing original, this is a self insert with bleach/gamer wishes. How is this tagged as an "original"....

2yr
Absoluto
AbsolutoLv3Absoluto

I'm more afraid of living forever than dying tomorrow ...

2yr
GawS
GawSLv5GawS

Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍

3yr
DARK_SAGE
DARK_SAGELv4DARK_SAGE

Keep going please đŸ€©đŸ‘Œ

3yr
ahmed_waleed_1200
ahmed_waleed_1200Lv5ahmed_waleed_1200

thanks for the Chapter keep writing

3yr
Lord_tabs
Lord_tabsLv1Lord_tabs

Guzzle the tea down

3yr
Mental
MentalLv2Mental

Chp 1: MC dies, i will never bow to anyone and only do what i want. look for number 1, myself. Chp 2: MC meets ROB. ROB gives orders/missions for MC. MC, Yes Sir.

3yr
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