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Notes by the Author This is my very first time writing a story, and even writing in English is my first time too, so if you see any error and misspelling remember that I'll edit it right away if I reread it again. And as you all can see my story uses real-life religions, so if you're religious and been offended by my story, I'm truly sorry that I offended you. And I hope you can understand that my story is just fictitious and are not real. Writing is just my hobby and I'm still a student, so I can't really post new chapters daily. About Myth: ADPR 1) Just like I said up above, this'll use real-life religions and mythologies, but most of the stories in the religions and mythologies that I used, would be change a lot, so don't expect that all of the Gods in the mythologies I used will be added. 2)The chapters will have tons of POV changes, mainly would me the main character Haruki and his enemies and friends, and I'm gonna us both first person for Haruki and third person for the others, but other times it will change. 3)Like in many mythologies, side stories which are cannon will be created in the future so that you'll know more about the world and the characters more. Spoiler 4)Not only mythologies are gonna be added, but also famous stories and real-life people in the past are gonna be added too, so there's gonna be a chance that some of the heroes in your country are gonna be here. Also you can comment about what you like and don't like about my story, don't worry I take suggestions and criticisms.
The story in one word is just A.M.A.Z.I.N.G !!!! The storyline goes in a flow and there are always cliffhanger in the end which will make you attached to your seats. The world description is perfect so goes with the characters and yeah a little bit of humor in between is just like a chef kiss. Thou there were some errors but still the story was so good that I wasn't able to stop myself from giving a five star rating. Keep up the Good work Author!!
First of all the the story is very interesting, the mc has a good moral even through he has given up his life. I find that your also a fellow Filipino and it's not easy writing English with all the grammars, that even for me feels confusing. But the way you write your story is very clever. keep up the work man, I like your story. The story has also many chapters, I'll continue reading your story. keep up the good work.
I enjoyed reading this story. The first paragraph definitely hooks the reader in, and the rest add a layer of mystery. It keeps you intrigued. This story has serious potential to going premium and I'm shocked not many people read this yet give it a shot since it's free it'll give the author a reason to keep writing this hidden gem. The story development is superb with an interesting plot, steady update and well detail character description. I love your work, thou I don't read this genre but this got me hooked. Great job Author keep going ❤ [img=recommend] FIVE STARS ❤
Overall : the concept of the story was unique and the plot line was interesting! The synopsis really draws the attention of the readers to dig in more into the story! Writing quality : the story had little to no mistakes made in the story, even there was a mistake, it wouldn’t affect the reading of the story. The writing style was unique and easy to read with good words used in a first person view. Updating : the updates are stable! Characters : the main character was described well in the auxiliary chapter, there were details on how the he looked like and what family background he has. He also has his own set of personality which can be seen in the story! The character dialogues were also interesting and fresh to the eyes~! World background : the magical background of other things were well written and described out by the author in the auxiliary chapter! The details given was understandable and great. The imaginative creativity put into this was great as it is created by the author! My thoughts : the story definitely has the potential to soar into great heights! Though I am not a type into action kind of books but this one was a good read and would definitely recommend it!! hope to see you continue this amazing story, keep up the good work author!!! ✨☺️
This novel is so cool 😳 It's written in the first person which I have recently found out is very rare on Webnovel. The novel has a very complex and intricate plot. The author's writing style is very unique and can easily pull in readers such as myself. Overall a wonderful read worthy of tremendous success.