First of all the the story is very interesting, the mc has a good moral even through he has given up his life. I find that your also a fellow Filipino and it's not easy writing English with all the grammars, that even for me feels confusing. But the way you write your story is very clever. keep up the work man, I like your story. The story has also many chapters, I'll continue reading your story. keep up the good work.
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