Comments of chapter undefined of The Goblin's Feast
The Goblin's Feast
kuhaku_sora
Chapter comments39
Managed to lose my interest in one chapter. Definitely among the few novels that can do it that fast.
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kuhaku_sora
I'm kind of feeling weird seeing all these unnaturally used verbs. Maybe you wanted to enhance reading experience by not using regular words, but using it incorrectly will instead make it worse. Leered, looked, glared, stared, they're similar, but not. And pranced? That's not even similar with dash, or are you thinking of using pounced? I think there're others but those 2 strike me hard. Well, keep up the good work author.
wow. .. author really has his way with words . .. I am impressed, I don't read too many novels but this is my first time seeing the word Leer being used in a sentence. But here comes the question thats bugging me. .. Did the hospital release him out for a walk at night? or early in the morning? the current predicament that mc found himself in seems improbable in both night and early in the morning. Unless Im missing something like the place, it doesn't make sense how there is noone else in the scene. I'll reread this tomorrow cause maybe Im just drowsy and missed a few words.
