MasterHexer
this is getting good
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Great start, have high expectations for the future of this novel.
now I'm super interested
hmm...🤔🤔🤔
thank you for giving us a story with diversity!
looks like the black sphere, gantz
Thanks
"Many people died, many were forgotten with time." Past tense? Is what we are reading a memory of the mc or is it as he is experiencing it?
Considering that English is not the author’s main language, the quality of the story so far is rather satisfactory. Good, even. The author can improve their punctuation and grammar, but aside from that, an enaging story so far.