Comments of chapter undefined of Gods of Legendary

I liked it but there's a lot of things you can improve at.If you improve at those points I will star your story and you will receive a good collection.Don't get me wrong but in the first chapter like you wrote,"God said ok".Fonts shouldn't be written like that.Hiffens to be used and repetitions to not be included since it's a story and not a poem.Expecting more from you.Really liked your idea of imagining things like these.Great work.Keep it up.Also check out my stories for more inspiration.I have wrote 3 stories.Thank you.