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Jagriti_Mandal

Jagriti_Mandal

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I'm a young author. (Chikki and Kari, The golden tears) Instagram: author_jagriti2009.

2020-08-05 JoinedGlobal
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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal5mth
    Posted

    Excited✨. I wish you all the best for your book. I am sure, it will be amazing. A sister is a wonderful companion, and this story will prove that.

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    Sisters as Investigators
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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal11mth
    Replied to imagineTishaD

    Thank you

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Mithi_La

    Thank you girl

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to DaoistsFt1A6

    Thank you

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Monsoon_Mangoes

    Thank you Mam!Stay tuned for the updates😊!

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    THE FANTASY LAND
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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to MORAN94

    Ohk,thank you for your advices.

    Once there were three girls. They were best friends. One of them was intelligent and very helpful to others. She lived in singapore and had come to Paris because of her studies. Her name was Melanie. The second one was very good in sports. She was very clever. She helped others in their difficulties. She was from USA and had come to Paris because of her mother's transfer. Her name was Emmaline. The last but not the least , Felicia .She lived in Paris from a long time. She was extraordinary. She was a a black belt in karate 🥋. She scored the most in her grade 💯. She was an expert in all the things. She helped others to achieve their goal. They all met on a winter day on 21st June 2009. Melanie was going to shop for buying some groceries. She went inside and went straight to counter 1. She got the flour and butter there. A little later, she had all the items in the list so she went to the take the bill. She stood in the line for about 15 minutes. She was patient but a woman pushed her to come first. She got very angry 😡😡. She asked her ,
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    THE FANTASY LAND
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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Ziawrites2

    Thank you mam

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    THE FANTASY LAND
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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to MORAN94

    Thank you mam!

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Raymundo_Dobson

    Hi,could I join too?Do check my book and inform me at insta: tuli2_009.

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    Pathway
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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Maheen_Nisa

    Thank you miss!

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Emi_McG

    Thank you Emily!😊Yes,sure it will be posted soon.Stay tuned!

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Posted

    Superb!!!!Enjoyed a lot...this is the first story that I found interesting in webnovel!! Hope you will improve further.Nice...keep up the good work...read my stories too...and hope you will learn mine too...so good luck!

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    Memoria's journey
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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Posted

    I wish I could give negative review but I couldn't,so I gave you 1 star.Your story has no mature content.You have written about how the world is formed,may I ask,how do you know,how the world is formed?.Technically,you have written something wrong,something imaginary. I don't mean that writing imaginary is wrong but writing on a real topic is completely wrong.You have plenty grammar mistakes.Your content is less,mistakes are more.Ha,first correct your english then become an author.

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    Gods of Legendary
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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Fidha_Zaara

    This is why everything in your story has no inspired content.Your just writing useless content.

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Jagriti_Mandal

    Read my stories too.

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Fidha_Zaara

    Your most welcome.

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Jagriti_Mandal

    I didn't misunderstand.You have written in a bad manner.It's your duty to improve grammar before writing story.

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Replied to Jagriti_Mandal

    What did I misunderstand?

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Posted

    I read 2 chapters.No proper punctuation Mark's are placed,no proper full stops and capital letters.First know the basics then start writing.I didn't like the content.

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  • Jagriti_Mandal
    Jagriti_Mandal1yr
    Commented

    I liked it but there's a lot of things you can improve at.If you improve at those points I will star your story and you will receive a good collection.Don't get me wrong but in the first chapter like you wrote,"God said ok".Fonts shouldn't be written like that.Hiffens to be used and repetitions to not be included since it's a story and not a poem.Expecting more from you.Really liked your idea of imagining things like these.Great work.Keep it up.Also check out my stories for more inspiration.I have wrote 3 stories.Thank you.

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