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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean

LaxusDarkMoon
LaxusDarkMoonLv1LaxusDarkMoon

I like the fanfic, I really do, but the dialogue is so poorly done that it hurts... Literally no one talks like that, the dialogue sounds like two amateur actors are trying to recite a poorly written script... Sorry if I'm being stupid, but I can't... The idea is good, the plot you built is good, but the execution is horrible, definitely at the MTL level of a Chinese Novel...

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DevilsArray
DevilsArrayLv5DevilsArray

being humble, humane, and sincere is never bad. but people forget even bad guys have good side, cynical guys like mc are grey and have both good and bad in them

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Zerot_Solar
Zerot_SolarLv6Zerot_Solar

Actually I was wondering when he would like someone to not just use as pawn, even evil MC have their humane side... Personally i like the Accelerator evil type of MC.

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Dao_Of_Laziness
Dao_Of_LazinessLv4Dao_Of_Laziness

Dont sacrafIce isa atleast dude. Im pretty sure anyone would gain some form of attachment to a person thats been caring for them for like 8 years. it doesnt even have to be like a new mother or anything. Thanks for the chapter

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Orthanos
OrthanosLv5Orthanos

Their are times when being evil has its good merits. Like when times need changes to happen in order to sacrifice for the better tomorrow. Some may do evil under the greater good. Then again Good and Evil is all about perspective, motive, the process, the result, and the consequences. The symbol of Taijitu or the Yin-Yang, the good in evil and the evil in the good, The necessary evils of the world. Its all about perspective, actions, and consequences.

Greatjj
GreatjjLv3Greatjj

i dont mind him being grey or evil mc but plz dont make him good. also make him kill luffy

Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5Hollysummoapocaly

Hmm, I thought he was going to have his aunt as a woman. Like he said it. If in your descendants you have someone strong. And the MC is the strongest of the tribe. Pity.

Ryo_Kami
Ryo_KamiLv5Ryo_Kami

Does anyone have a thought about the MC personality almost like aizen or someone that has intelligence schemes of Villain?

Efrinn
EfrinnLv1Efrinn

I really don't wish mc had any emotional side, although it would be good if the novel made sense, but there's no other benefit.

Book_seeker
Book_seekerLv14Book_seeker

I'm a little sad isa didn't join the love interest

DON_FLUFFLES
DON_FLUFFLESLv4DON_FLUFFLES

Does the mc like Raki as a sister or he just want to use her?

Celebiiiiiiiiiiiii
CelebiiiiiiiiiiiiiLv1Celebiiiiiiiiiiiii

Aww I think this is great Even tho he can’t love Isa as a mother she deserves a lot of happiness for protecting him and raising him!

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

William_Ruiz
William_RuizLv4William_Ruiz

It's not evil when you now the world is soo ****ed up and you need the strength just to survive. His dream is the universe, he needs more power for that and being nice will never make him go far. Thanks for the chapter.

Emperador_004
Emperador_004Lv3Emperador_004

As un salto de tiempo porfa y cuando va a intentar el haki de armamento

KenJakwo
KenJakwoLv1KenJakwo

I think I'll of cringe if I continue 😫🤢

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

crimsonitaci
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crimsonitaci
crimsonitaciLv11crimsonitaci

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DaoistFbOtWp
DaoistFbOtWpLv1DaoistFbOtWp

Как по мне этот фанфик мёртв, гг пытаются преподнести гениальным и продуманным, но как по мне он тратит время в пустую с этими розовыми соплями хрен знает зачем. Проще говоря он страдает фигнёй.