Master4thWall
I like the fanfic, I really do, but the dialogue is so poorly done that it hurts... Literally no one talks like that, the dialogue sounds like two amateur actors are trying to recite a poorly written script... Sorry if I'm being stupid, but I can't... The idea is good, the plot you built is good, but the execution is horrible, definitely at the MTL level of a Chinese Novel...
Their are times when being evil has its good merits. Like when times need changes to happen in order to sacrifice for the better tomorrow. Some may do evil under the greater good. Then again Good and Evil is all about perspective, motive, the process, the result, and the consequences. The symbol of Taijitu or the Yin-Yang, the good in evil and the evil in the good, The necessary evils of the world. Its all about perspective, actions, and consequences.