Comments of chapter undefined of Danmachi - Tales of the multi talented Swordsman.

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you killed it with him just replacing the original mc sorry im gonna stop here. Replacement mc's usually means just a re hash of the original plot and involves lazy or un inspired writing

good start, definitely interesting to say the least for an intro. im assuming you are using the fact that he absorbed those soul remnants as an excuse on why be becomes op later huh

The cover is misleading...I mean Bell is a **** with short white hair and red eyes. I was expecting an original MC...

thanks for the chapter

dont drop great work a new adventure without a pussy bell

man, I'm going to drop here not because I killed the bell. but because I'm sure that from that point onwards goes the stupidity of fear of the butterfly effect. which I just don't understand. if you want to use that aspect, just the existence of the new character alone is more than enough to cause a huge damage in the story. and because of that, most of the protagonists of fanfic novels become spectators. because the authors are not aware of how to work with butterfly effects and when one appears that it would be interesting to see a fight, the mc does not fight because it can cause such an effect. in my opinion, these protagonists have the opportunity to change their destiny, after all, they do not have a destination, they are extra, meaning an icognita to worry about what may happen in the future is the same as living in Rio de Janeiro and being afraid of dying during an assault. it can happen any day, you don't live on it. which is not an option in a novel.

reincarnating as characters specially bell meh not for me. Hope you do well on your book author.

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What an interesting intro... I think the intro itself was enough to show the writers determination and creativity... I'm looking forward the the next chapters alot more now

filipino made goons vote for this one

just gonna the only harem members I care about are Riveria, Syr/Freya and Artemis the twins too, I would love to see Memoria Freese characters especially Bheara

damn loli~

finally some danmachi for me!!

I was kind of hoping to see an OC, being Bell is kinda boring. Join/already being in Hestia's familia is even more boring.

gross, old man soul taking over the harem

hello?

hi

in danmachi Gods can tell if you lie so it would seem Hestia would notice soon that the mc isint Bell and so will Freya she can see souls color or something like that