Comments of chapter undefined of The Wizard called Oz - HP

I fully understand your reasoning and hope that you enjoy recreating this novel. All I ask is you don't get discouraged part way through and abandon it like so many authors before you.

I will read this, as I am a huge fan of the wizard called oz, but please please please finish this rewrite to completion

pls continue your story

It's a gamble. Honestly, first person, it's a fifty-fifty. You can write something fabulous... or completely ruin it. First person has a major drawback : depersonalisaion. Paradoxal, no ? First person can show thoughts, but it has tendency to crush personnality. We see less because we are too much "in" the character. It's real talent to be able to write a 3D character at the first person. So good luck.

no worries I have thoroughly enjoyed this book and look forward to the rewrite

yo. make a discrod and I will hop on, heck I will be actively bouncing ideas back and forth if you need it, in something like writers corner. about the title, it just doesnt hit differently, thats the formula to draw in people, so it would attract more reader, so that should also be a major motivation for you.

Think you should change his name from Oz also Merlins surname isn’t ambrious its Emrys full name Myrddin Emrys.

Goodluck on the rewrite author

well, I'll be waiting for for rewrite author San, so please do release them soon. I mean an improved version of this, sign me in man.

sniff, the end of a rlly good novel, man but srsly hope ur job goes well, do whatever u want, and I'll head over and read the other one, also is this FF u made not going to update? cos I'll have to boot this one out of my collection and then add ur new one.

good luck on your new fanfic author san