Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

RGLFRGLWASDFGLAGAAAARHH YOU EVIL AUTHOR you REALLY don't miss a chance to cliffhang do you?!

MM glad to see the pacing back to what it was, I was worried for a bit there. I was NOT expecting him to unearth a conspiracy about why the safe zones fell though - especially after previously mentioning it was a "punishment from the tower because people weren't killing enough Kenetice". I'm excited to see where this goes - does the faction kicking off the safe zone fall have an item to do so, or has figured out a way to trick the tower into "punishing" the people. Again I'll shamelessly offer my services as a free Editor on a trial basis if Author is interested in that.

Thanks for the chapter

i have put like almost 200 stones in another fanfic but i think i will start to put them into this

thanks for the chpater

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Thanks for the chapter!!! Also, don't give the evolution bead so quickly!!!

very good, waiting for new chapters

Thx for the chapters night.

thanks for the chapter! 😃 --lots of nice surprises in this chapter. biggest one was otto suddenly becoming emotional. he's a real human being, folks! i thought it was good that he showed that he's more than just a master at calculating and scheming. 😊 --not bad, elliot. not bad at all. 😆

I hate it when these stories bring up cringy ass cliche emotions, pseudo-family , wtf???, he basically just spent a lot of money of them and they accepted it because its a great deal*cough*and plot armour*cough*, why cant u please the soap opera clichesT_T_T_T_T_T .Its not villainous to be gay bros with every random dude who subservant to the mc

I'm pretty mixed on this chapter. I like what was written, but I do think Otto acting like was not set up very well we saw very little of him just interacting with everyone so this came off more out of character then anything.

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