Comments of chapter undefined of God´s Eyes
God´s Eyes
HideousGrain
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This is my opinion is your story so you do what you want. I already said before because I am in favor of the MC going to school via Greg but I will detail my thoughts better here. 1- That you are not good at socializing does not mean that you do not have self-esteem, pride and / or self-esteem. Therefore the affiliated school that everywhere yells "BACK DOOR" or the way I see it "SCHOOL FOR SERVANTS" is not a very good decision. I don't like very arrogant MCs but I think MC shouldn't and wouldn't like to take that broken. 2- Considering how his mother died, the weirdness around everything and that it sounds more to me that the family for which the MC's mother worked would hurt his death is more out of pride than anything else. Why would the MC want to get involved with Greg's family? When obviously the latter do not want it to be? We are going to tell a boy who has a supposedly useless soul, non-existent strength and with little or no experience that valley and kill 5 star beasts in 3 weeks is it to help? They are considered? Do they like you? I do not believe it. 3- This here is for the MC himself, even if he's blind he shouldn't be an idiot, but why does he seem to be? If someone told me to help them find a husky at a cheap price and said husky even breathes fire but those people have ill will to me, I would honestly be quite angry. To the point of not wanting to have anything to do with them. 4- I think it was pretty obvious why Greg was "good" with the MC so why did he get along with him too? And so fast at that? The MC had problems with his eyes, not with his brain. 5- Even if the old man feels disappointed I will continue to insist that the old man is not stupid, he should know why the MC's soul is weak at the beginning. Even ignoring that with the MC's eye talent and "strange" soul would be enough for him to help him enter a school in a teacher-disciple relationship. And that would be a better option than owing something to Greg's family when they owe him a lot. 6- I continue with the same here, change the MC's mentality as soon as possible, if he is a 13-year-old boy who is an orphan in a post-apocalyptic world he is more mature than those of his age, but to be honest I have not noticed the "maturity" of the MC. Only his endless stupidity, after all a guy who treats you most of the time coldly, obviously uses you to solve his doubts and stops talking, invites you to his awakening then keeps in touch with you for no reason is totally normal in a society where the weak die and the strong reign supreme. Yes, it's totally normal let's be friends.
