Reviews of The Potion of Rage

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First of all every time a new person is speaking there should be a new line. I would probably enjoy this story if not for the fact of that it's painful to read. Once grammar issue is fixed this novel will probably be above average at best. The protagonist seems too forgiving in the chapters of read almost reminds me of Japanese push over characters.

Story is great and has me hooked, need more chapters! The character development is strong and the story is solid, @looking forward to seeing How the main character evolves.

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