Iβm disappointed, I thought that iβd finally get a good evil female mc story but noβ¦
Itβs the same old cliches, I continued reading despite the tropes because I liked your writing but this is too much. She somehow managed to make her brother the king but she blushes every conversations she has with a kid, a KID. Typical reaction for the ML I guess, I thought that I would see a strong and independent MC but no, also why is her character so inconsistent, sometimes she haters her father and sometimes she wants his love. After everything that heβs doneβ¦. I know I already said it but why is she doing the thing every female MC does when they speak to the ML. "I canβt read hin" "he outsmarted me" "heβs so sharp I have to be more careful!" and their relationship feels so forced, the moment they interacted the first time I knew this would happen but stillβ¦. I continued reading hoping for the best. But still I guess thatβs what poeple like here, goody two shows MCs that is depende on the ML. Also why is she even reincarnated if she still acts like a kid? I cringe every time she calls herself evilβ¦
Please tell me it gets better, and Iβll immediately read everything and endure the start againβ¦.
My review is what I felt and not what you usually read, I try to describe my experience as vividly as possible so that Authors can improve. Hopefully this review helps you, thatβd make me happy. Anyways sorry if this came out as rude but just like I said iβm explaining everything I felt without sugarcoating.