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Comments of chapter undefined of New Life in Akame Ga kill

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New Life in Akame Ga kill

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Origin_Saint
Origin_SaintLv13Origin_Saint

Author you're writing style makes all the emotions feel flat, I hope your can find a way to show the characters emotion and make us feel what they feel more clearly ,watch a YouTube video or something 🤷‍♂️. Also you didn't show his motivation for killing his clan properly.

3yr
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MkGod
MkGodLv14MkGod

most fanfic authors have that problem.

3yr
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cris146
cris146Lv2cris146

he became itachi killed his clan

3yr
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Roloter
RoloterLv4Roloter

Is it just me waiting for him to kill that useless girl?

3yr
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Flappy_Duck
Flappy_DuckLv4Flappy_Duck

Esdeath and the MC should have a forever back and forth in terms of who is the dominant one and who is the subordinate one.

3yr
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Jailing
JailingLv5Jailing

Thank you for the chapter!

3yr
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The_Envious_One
The_Envious_OneLv13The_Envious_One

so basically he killed his family for no reason anddd got nothing for it he took an army he could lead and threw it in the trash, this is not a good mc

11mth
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Animecormade
AnimecormadeLv1Animecormade

3yr
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Darkmusho
DarkmushoLv13Darkmusho

Noice

3yr
1
Death_panda
Death_pandaLv4Death_panda

Don’t like the maid

1yr
DaoistUGp5C3
DaoistUGp5C3Lv4DaoistUGp5C3

2yr
iron_wolf
iron_wolfLv13iron_wolf

Elizabeth could have snuck out and told him as soon as she found out not keep quiet and go along, PROBABLY KILLED SOME PEOPLE TOO. You should have killed her too

2yr
Zenfree
ZenfreeLv13Zenfree

His power and strength is explained so poorly. Along with esdeath defeating him out of knowhwere.

2yr
Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanks

2yr
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