MotivatedSloth
I came here expecting a good old harem smut story. but this just a very confusing story with incomplete description of what happened and why... No explanation of system, two worlds visited before, why he can't cultivate, what phenomena happened one year ago... so goodbye
O god MC is already acting like a full time retard & after reading the comments this novel already looks trash. I like how the author is bashing his readers for expecting the kind of novel he implied it would be. - Your story is all over the place - Its super confusing to read it more then half the comments are like WTF is going on are you sure its in the right order? - MC already looks like a wimp - Already showing of what he should not be showing off (items, the plant) - Already making stupid mistakes for no reason well maybe money but he already had another safer way to make money that would not endanger his and his families life. - Already hiding his power for no reason whatsoever. - Already acting like a simp. - I could go on and on about how "bad" / "confusing" / ... your novel would be. Also don't act like a saint about what your readers where expecting your novel to be. Even implying it in your synopses. Ill give it a few more chapters but if half the comments are right we might as well drop it and go to the next novel.
Can you tell me if he will suffer a lot for his choices cuz it's contradictory to the 'Face Slap' tag? and I kind of have trauma with Mc suffering from 'Everything will be my way!' Will he grow or will he keep suffering even after getting burned for his mistake:? Seeing so many comments in these chapters I started to worry if I should keep reading.