MotivatedSloth
Indont understand why he Is trash? he can cultivate as well right? It was his rewArd? He broke trough..? Also he gave this girl his position as heir? Wtf
Initially, I was going to bother responding to it in any way. Then I remembered why I stopped responding to that Weezyf guy comments and even went to the church (surprisingly rare for me now to do so) once he claimed to drop the novel. I really don't have the power to answer the questions about the paragraph that were answered in literaly the previous sentence, and that's the level of the points this guy brings. While I won't force you to read nor claim you will like it (since everyone has their own tastes so I cannot judge that) but please, do yourself a favour and read the story yourself instead of relying on the opinion of someone who came to my novel expecting linear and simplistic, obvious from the first look type of plot. Because this novel is not like this and it pains me to even mention it as it should be damn obvious by this point.
godofwar1:Thanks dude. I needed that. I dropped it and was thinking if it may get better after some chapter. But now that it gets worse no use reading it.
O god MC is already acting like a full time retard & after reading the comments this novel already looks trash. I like how the author is bashing his readers for expecting the kind of novel he implied it would be. - Your story is all over the place - Its super confusing to read it more then half the comments are like WTF is going on are you sure its in the right order? - MC already looks like a wimp - Already showing of what he should not be showing off (items, the plant) - Already making stupid mistakes for no reason well maybe money but he already had another safer way to make money that would not endanger his and his families life. - Already hiding his power for no reason whatsoever. - Already acting like a simp. - I could go on and on about how "bad" / "confusing" / ... your novel would be. Also don't act like a saint about what your readers where expecting your novel to be. Even implying it in your synopses. Ill give it a few more chapters but if half the comments are right we might as well drop it and go to the next novel.
Can you tell me if he will suffer a lot for his choices cuz it's contradictory to the 'Face Slap' tag? and I kind of have trauma with Mc suffering from 'Everything will be my way!' Will he grow or will he keep suffering even after getting burned for his mistake:? Seeing so many comments in these chapters I started to worry if I should keep reading.