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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece - A Devastating World

dadaoist
dadaoistLv6dadaoist

He eat a devil fruit but don't even begin to explain what fruit it is.His new body is 4 years old but he never feel strange about it. He never realise he was in another world until he met the pirates.

dadaoist
dadaoistLv6dadaoist

Love the idea of your story. Making a dark mature fic of one piece. But there is no transition between chapter 1 and 2. He get a devil fruit out of the blue (pirate know what it is and should have protected it).