Reviews of Harem king System

I came due to the fact I saw a girl who becomes the greatest catgirl in anime history on the cover and stayed because the novel is decent. So keep up the good work author.

I will be brutally Honest Author dosnt has any writing skills to speak of. His whole english is broken and anyone with a decent degree of the language can spot at least 50 to 100 grammatical mistakes on EACH chapter. This includes the typical typo of His/her He/She being mixed up by a person who has no idea of the english language, like write, right, rite being mixed up too If it wasnt that i was looking for a FF with Tohru, Lucua and Sagiri from Yuna san i wont be reading this. So pls... at least have some decency to edit it a little so its not a textwall

Five stars for a good start and potential. The author, please improve the design.

cant wait for more chapters the start feel great so i really hope for the best so take those 5 Stars and make us a great book 👍......................

Good novel 👍 ..............................................................................................................................

it's great fanfaction to read also I hope the author adds yuuna. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍

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great story i hope it has chapters every day and good luck to you More good more good more good Good more good more good more More good more good more good

This has alot of potential just from the cover I can tell you put in work on that some stay safe dont force yourself and do what every you want it's your story

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ME GUSTA COMO COMENZO , ALGO DIFERENTE DE LOS DEMAS "FANFIC" QUE USAN LOS MISMOS ANIMES REPETIDOS , ME GUSTA COMO METISTE ANIMES QUE NO SE USAN MUCHO .

If you were looking for a fun harem story, well the beginning is like that. Right now we're in the first mission and the MC was forcibly brainwashed by a ROB to be 'evil'. Afterwards we waste 20k words on highschool of the dead by following the canon story. Where we only get out of the school with shido... being alive. (c19 atm). My word of advise is to wait and see if this'll turn back to the original tone. Because right now, the fic is all over the place and has nothing going for it now.

The overall story is pretty good. I love how the main character uses the power of romantic comedy to get the girls and make his evil plans a success with the help of the system, muhahaha! In this way it should be a harem protagonist. Every time I read fanfiction on this site it gives me a headache that all reincarnates need a pretty face and a sweet tongue to get the girls, it makes me wonder: is it that they have not learned anything from the power of romantic comedy ? In truth, if you need a pretty face to have the girls, you are very far from the original MCs, no matter how princesses they are. I like how the author uses our cultural elements of romance.

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Basically he go after all the girls and try to collect them. Taking the place of protagonists. Coming here i was hoping to see how he defends world and get some benefits while at it. Get some girls one at a time or world. But this here is just that. The story of a collector who given all the benefits without doing anything. And he already go after all the story girls at the same time.

pretty good so far, it reminds me of akikan's starting as a mangaka. The only thing that I have a problem with is how the characters talk and the amount of "..." in conversations.

I dropped after the first mission,..........................................................................................................

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