Comments of chapter undefined of The Incubus God
The Incubus God
PrinceWithUndies
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That's sad considering it's a good story, and even if you don't like the mc being emotionless you can still add an 'emotion' only for his women under him. The mc may be emotionless at first but is very possessive, overbearing, etc. There was also another novel I've found where an mc was a total evil. Give it a read maybe you'll find which is the right path for your story.
Im really sad, and i mean it. For the past week i was looking at all the New novels, everything with evil MC and harem. I have to Say yours is the best. Its a really big shame. MC is the best, i dont know why you feel like this, who truly knows how 100k yo devil acts? I dont know how to help you with that. Such a good start. Hope you will think about more. Dammn
it was good. I do enjoy it. as for you thinking it was making the character seem like 100,000 years you can show his skill in a later date. just even if someone was old they still have there other characteristics or trait they are. just go with the flow. continue on if you do go back on it. as for what happen just do it. you learn and gain experience as you continue to write and have more ideas. if it was me I continue on and just improve my skill also get good ideas and vibe from my view who read my work. at the end of the day you making progress what it is. I believe in you. just dont let it stop you if you feel like it won't work. if you stop than there will be no progress. anyway to improve is keep going.
