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Comments of chapter undefined of My CEO Harem Cultivation System

Siya_Nea
Siya_NeaLv2Siya_Nea

More of CEO's personality is showing, this is nice

Maian
MaianLv15Maian

I think that most of the time it’s better to be in the main characters head. But from time to time it’s nice to “see” the thoughts of the supporting cast.

ruskybarns
ruskybarnsLv1ruskybarns

honestly the last 10 or so chapters have been super boring . I preferred the earlier chapters .

BanDoo
BanDooLv3BanDoo

With multiple people in a chapter, this point of view is perfect. But if there's only a few (2-3) people the previous chapter's point of view would be preferred.

jclozanoc
jclozanocLv15jclozanoc

having both pov is best

Alanray64
Alanray64Lv14Alanray64

Thanks for the chapter

Gool_Tv
Gool_TvLv14Gool_Tv

Hmm it depends on the situation. To give some of the characters more weight it might be a good idea to have a mix of both

RARC19
RARC19Lv4RARC19

Thanks for the chapter!

RyuDBK
RyuDBKLv15RyuDBK

"headhopping" as you said it, is fine, but make it clear who we are "hopping" into and don't make the parts to short or unless it's for comedic effect or something. But I would recommend focusing more on the Mc, with the occasional "side hop", he is the Mc after all. It also makes it easier and more relatable for the readers.

newchapterletsgo
newchapterletsgoLv14newchapterletsgo

I like the other chapter omnicent view better

Oscar_Abrahamsson
Oscar_AbrahamssonLv12Oscar_Abrahamsson

I prefer the first person view like this chapter

JojoSoni
JojoSoniLv11JojoSoni

keep MC's view but do change to 3rd person pov. don't change pov in the middle of the chapter. I'm fine with both pov as long as you don't waste much time. though I think 3rd person pov was better. idk. I'm not sure

SkullsandFlowers
SkullsandFlowersLv13SkullsandFlowers

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Reaper_210
Reaper_210Lv5Reaper_210

Thanks for the chapter

InkCloud
InkCloudLv4InkCloud

the author notes r fun :>

Maian
MaianLv15Maian

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

AsuraSaiyan
AsuraSaiyanLv13AsuraSaiyan

Thx for the chap!!

NORMALLL
NORMALLLLv5NORMALLL

Heyy 2ep thats very good and for your question i think both of them good

Saintfallen
SaintfallenLv10Saintfallen

a espera de novos capitulo Obrigado pelo Cap!!