Reviews of Song of Creation- The Legacy

I'm giving the review 4.4 points. why? because the story hasn't progressed far yet. The World background is still minimal but it is beautifully written. You can feast your imagination into the beauty it tells. the writing quality is good for me and we can see the difference of the MC and the other character or races here too. it was enjoyable to read.. i hope for more chapters to unveiled the beauty of the world too. the problems that is talked here also an urgent topic in our world nowadays so it is building the anticipation too...

Good novel as after reading this i get that author must have put a lot of effort writing it and as you can see that the story is good and i can suggest you guys to give it try

The beginning may be a bit slow but know that Song Of Creation is totally worth your attention, so I invite you, the reader, to give it a chance and to devour it at your heart's content, Jane or BlackSnow (her nom de plume) is an experienced writer who describes the scene with so many details that you can even picture the story yourself, Writing quality 5/5, Stability of updates can't tell for now, Story development a bit slow but still enjoyable 4/5, Character Design 5/5, World Background I was in the blur at the start but I quickly understood that it was a sci-fi/fantastic world which is an original combination 5/5

I'm enjoying the story so far, but I feel the pace is a bit too slow for me. I also appreciate the effort put into details, it really breaths life into the scenery, the world, and the characters. But I think it also contributes to the slower pace. Nice one by the way👍

An awesome story with very strong details and superb world creation! The only thing that I want to critique on is the pace of story. I felt that the some parts of the story were very slow while the others were at a pleasant pace. I have also complimented on the accuracy and the detailed explanation in the story but I feel that it could also be a double edged sword. An example of this could be in the first few chapters, the protagonist and his actions were very detailed but till the near end of the first chapter, all the protagonist had done was exit of his room. The ceremony in the second chapter was also beautifully and accurately described but I don't think it progressed much of the story even though it took about half the chapter. Overall, the critiques that I have stated are all due to personal preferences. This is a very well written novel till now and I'm quite certain that it will pop off in the future if the author keeps working on it! Good luck!