An awesome story with very strong details and superb world creation! The only thing that I want to critique on is the pace of story. I felt that the some parts of the story were very slow while the others were at a pleasant pace. I have also complimented on the accuracy and the detailed explanation in the story but I feel that it could also be a double edged sword. An example of this could be in the first few chapters, the protagonist and his actions were very detailed but till the near end of the first chapter, all the protagonist had done was exit of his room. The ceremony in the second chapter was also beautifully and accurately described but I don't think it progressed much of the story even though it took about half the chapter. Overall, the critiques that I have stated are all due to personal preferences. This is a very well written novel till now and I'm quite certain that it will pop off in the future if the author keeps working on it! Good luck!

Hilarious, edgy and fun! At first I was slight amused and concerned by the very casual style of writing being used in a cultivation related novel, such as "bass boosted trap music", etc. Usually, the cultivation novels that I've read have a much more formal tone, but after reading for a bit, I realized that this was a very refreshing and hilarious style that I had never experienced before! The fun writing style of the author greatly complimented the comedy in the story and made it even more hilarious! Overall, it is a refreshing novel with a unique style that I have not seen in much novels before and I hope that the author continues to write it and work on it to improve it further. Great to read if you like cultivation novels and want a good laugh!

hm....stocking chapters before taking break maybe?

Ren looking at monolith be like