Comments of chapter undefined of Evolving Ghost System: Phantom Universe Expansion Pack

Not a really good story so far... The plot seems forced and rushed most of the time, the MC is half-braindead with no sense of self-preservation and doesn‘t even bother to get a basic understanding of his abilities and options. All other characters have litlle to no personality and badly written dialogues are a constant bother. Generally apart from the intial idea, the rest of the story is not worth reading...