Its an interesting start, it totally sets the mood and makes you curious as to what actually happened. At the same time it gives you a rough idea of how bad mankind can be. It gives off that edgy vibe and I love it haha XD
Its structured well :D
Feels like either the woman was his deceased wife, who paid a heavy price to kill the murderers, or a friend of our mc who regretted not saving both of them in time. Either way, this is intriguing
whoaaa!?!?. just pick this novel up. interesting. I must say Author son. we going to have some bed action in the future? lol I must see how things develope.