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Comments of chapter undefined of Douluo Dalu: Era of Tang Ming.

CRONOS24
CRONOS24Lv10CRONOS24

Gracias por el capitulo Gracias

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food
foodLv15food

wow these wishes will make this as boring as it possibly can

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DaoistSevenPaths
DaoistSevenPathsLv5DaoistSevenPaths

this is not really a crític but observation, Li Qiye and Nie Li are not talented in the way of comprehension innately,the reason both of them can comprehend and have enlightment easily is thanks to Millions and Thousands of years of knowledge accumulation respectively,in a simpler way,Genius of hardwork,their accumulation and experience from stupidly long períods of time made talent bê irrelevant tô them, the only talented one there is Ji,and even he was not a ultra mega Genius,he is a Genius of course but the true reason for his rise tô Power was the tenacity and obsession with ressurecting his wife,basically self discipline and tenacity,again not dissing or anything,but none of these guys are innately ultra talents in a innate way,they are Monsters thanks to knowledge,mindset and discipline,things this MC sorely lacks

TempestasUmbra
TempestasUmbraLv15TempestasUmbra

Can‘t imagine this story being any good after reading the first two chapters. The prologue was totally unnecessary as I have no idea what its use was. Should we feel sympathy for this waste of space called a MC? Should we feel disgusted by his behaviour and negligence of his family problems? I really have no idea... And the most frustating part? The MC just behaves like nothing happen when confronted with his five wishes.. If he really had expierienced such a ‚harsh‘ first life than he would habe wished for something different like a loving family or wealth, but instead he had choosen way too powerful stuff, but a crappy family with Tang Hao as a dad..??! Also his first thoughts in the new world were that he has to be careful of Tang San so that he won‘t find out about him being also a reincanator?? Why wish to his adopted brother if you can‘t even be honest to your brother, just be a normal orphan! He should have wished for an ultimate concealment skill so he doesn‘t need a protector like Tang Hao... Also, I seriously doubt the author can really use all the things the MC wished for too their full potential. And if there is one thing I hate the most, it is MC that don‘t use their powers efficiently to their utmost potential. These would be my wishes: 1. Twin Spirits(One Tool Spirit, probably a spear or dual blades/One beast spirit with OP-concealment abilities) 2. Being born ten years before canon as a orphan in some random village.. 3. Teleportation(good wish) 4. A library with fighting techniques/Weapon manuals/cultivation techniques/Movement technique/etc. 5. idk. maybe a skill to upgrade spirit rings with the energy from other spirit rings?? That would be all I need to become a god in that world. Because, yes there is something like too much good stuff will drown you...

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Willian_Humildad
Willian_HumildadLv2Willian_Humildad

There are 2 options like this ... the mc will be tang san .. the author's oc will only follow him and do not open anything new, 2 the mc will be tang san's bitch

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ImageCreator
ImageCreatorLv4ImageCreator

Yes, Zhuqing and Bibi dong, add Heavenly Snow Woman :)

Grimsight
GrimsightLv6Grimsight

I really liked how you started with the prologue, and wait for me a good story, but with these wishes this story is assured that it will be garbage, I do not understand the need of the authors to give so many wishes, just to despair not being able to carry the story and disgustingly op in 2 or 3 chapters and if it is going to follow the main story it will be even more boring, because it will only be like a spectator who is going to hit the enemies that the main characters could not.

SwordGod007
SwordGod007Lv5SwordGod007

you gave him memories and comprehension of li qiye and ji ning. If he can't destroy the world by the time he becomes *****(18) means you have wasted the story.... there is really no reason to make your wish so op....

ghyhh
ghyhhLv13ghyhh

I already feel like dropping but I'll try to continue

PrimorDious
PrimorDiousAuthorPrimorDious

the 3rd and 4th spirits are just for giving the MC an immortal vibe.

Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

Honestly there werent even 5 wishes, they were way more than just 5.

HDDreyar
HDDreyarLv5HDDreyar

Lowkey mad that a useless bum got all these benefits...

LoweCypher
LoweCypherLv4LoweCypher

So, is this another one of those boring op harem fics? Is so, I'll be on my way and not waste any more time to rant about anything and everything in the most irritatingly tldr way I can possibly type.

Lirg_Yob
Lirg_YobLv1Lirg_Yob

First, check wish list. If it's filled with self satisfied insert don't read. If I had wishes, first thing I would go for 'universal communication'. The ability to read, write, understand, and speak any language.

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

thanks for the chapter

Elegiud
ElegiudLv4Elegiud

I would made one of those wishes to completely ruin the family he had. At least to have the ability to travel between worlds so he can made them feel the pain he felt.

ze_ro
ze_roLv10ze_ro

stop it that's soo many wish don't make him so OP

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jrock_Rock
jrock_RockLv1jrock_Rock

Espero puedas terminar tu historia y no la abandones :'c

RedMonkeyDog
RedMonkeyDogLv3RedMonkeyDog

think 3 spirits is over the top but i'll read on

Nogitsune96
Nogitsune96Lv5Nogitsune96

trash