Reviews of Silence in the House of Mirrors (On haitus)
Silence in the House of Mirrors (On haitus)
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I liked it so..... At least meant to be 140 characters :/ __________________ ## _________________###* ______________.*##### _____________*###### ___________*####### __________*########. _________*#########. _________*#######*##* ________*#########*### _______*##########*__*## _____*###########_____* ____############ ___*##*######### ___*_____######## ___________*###### ____________*#####* ______________*####* ________________*#### __________________*##* ____________________*## _____________________*##. ____________________.#####. _________________.########## ________________.####*__*####
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For exp.....I don't know.....the **** I am needed to say in this..... I am just exp-eing.... Exp is not a word, but it's a mystical act that needs power commitment and cheer fucking will, its not easy to be an exp man, you need to be dependently counting on your exp and search the exp from everywhere to finally find your inner exp
First up, writing quality. Initial chaps were really good, smooth, consistent flow of writing. Later on, it deteriorated, slightly. I guess that can be fixed with a meagre amount of editing, but meh. Second, updating. Well, can't really say anything about it, so a five from me. Story development... Not going to lie, I went down a whole trip to so many feelings! Like, when I first started reading, I thought it would be really clichéd, but, it actually got more complex as I kept reading. So far, 9 chapters in, and I feel like I've read 20 chaps xD A suggestion though: switching povs makes it a bit confusing. Would be nice if you would stick to just 3rd pov, honestly. Next, character design. Once again, too early to judge. So far, it's good. Last, world background. I don't think there's been any opportunities to showcase the author's way of building the world? So I'll pass on this one. Good luck author! ♥ ♥ ♥
Just reading the first chapter, it grabbed my attention. Although there are still many improvements to be made about the way the writing style flows, the plot itself is interesting. I have much expectations and I hope the author can improve their writing because the short and simple sentences sometimes do not match the long, running sentences. Other than that, I love the way the chapter ends. It is just such a good way to have a cliffhanger! Good luck to this novel! I shall add it to my library and await for the day this novel has more than 100 chapters!
Well reading the first few chapters, I analysed that the FL has experienced some of the worst things in her past but now she has made herself strong and appeared as a character who is quite bold and carries a strong personality. As I read further it feels like to be connected with the story. Also I wanna say the author has created really a nice work where it is being depicted that One can become strong if he/she wants to. Keep up the good work, dear author. Adding this book to my library as this book grabbed my attention really well.
