Comments of chapter undefined of Race to The Throne

It's an okay chapter but a bit rushing, no world building nor scenery narrative, at least for me. But hey, this is the very first chapter after all, making the readers want to read more.

nice

great chapter

one thing I don't understand is why je want to create a gang when he is already a prince

Good job

good chapter. shows also how much potential it has although you should've focused more on the world-building to explain about the world more so that readers can understand this world more. Then you could've did a time-skip in the next chapter but no matter what the chapter is still good and I hope you continue this good story. by the way, did you make him go back in time or take him to another world completely cause you said something about ancient China and it made me confused

Not a bad start. competently written.

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Nice first chapter.

Not bad. Apart from a few grammatical errors its really good. I like how it was a nice kickstart to the story 👍🏾

good chapter. it shows how much potential this story has has although you should've focused more on the world-building to explain about the world so that readers can also understand this world more. Then you could've done the time-skip in the next chapter but no matter what the chapter is still good and I hope you continue this good story. by the way, did you make him go back in time or take him to another world completely cause you said something about ancient China and it made me confused?