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its the most fantastic fanfic ever and never dropped it its the best its really great I like the every time I read it and thanks author san this is the best [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This story started great. It was interesting since he was learning from mito and would be even more interesting if he stayed on this path. Alas, the author had to do what all other authors do to destroy the story. He wants all the powerful bloodlines and he get's them as easy as taking the blood from people. I mean, seriously, if it was so easy to gain a bloodline, everyone would have a few of them. Because of this the Funjutsu becomes forgotten in the next 20 chapters or more ( I do not know since I stopped reading since it become like any other overpowering and boring mc). Quite a shame, I really like the first 8 chapters... π’
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Haha the story screams Youth. The good thing is you did not see the Expandez ugh saved. Oh, a great friendship that you rarely see is a party in a fanfic, very much to my liking and in the person who gives their trust. Fuijutsu, Yaijutsu and Kenjutsu are shining right now, but he is preparing for other branches. Keep it up writer. ππ
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