Reviews of Raikou:re (Life in a Anime world)HIATUS

Kazami Yuuji...Grisia... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)...= 5 stars

sorry about my bad review. I just don't understand about the order of the chapter. it's not neat at all. it's like you just put a random plot in your chapter, and make it related to the previous chapter. especially earlier chapters. to be honest it's so confusing for me. I don't know other people, but for me it's doesn't make any sense. jumping pov to pov is also annoying. and the pov sometimes mixed with another pov. in chapter with the title 5 years, it's mean 5 years in the future right. but the chapter after that, there's no explanation when is the plot happening. I know there's 2 years ago, 6 months later. and it cameback to 1 year ago. if it is your writing style i've no problem. but please do some explanation. not the plot right away. I don't comment about grammar there's nothing I can do about it. and even my grammar is bad as you can see. so my conclusion is, make it in order. don't just put chapter after chapter with random plot. at least make same explanation not same random author note. thank you. it's just me ranting.

sorry to tell you this man .. if you wanna find the truth. you need to go for the hospital and do mental check and you will find the truth aha hahahahah 😆 🤣 😂 like what they say Truth Hurt. not trying to be an axxhole but seriously 😐 there is no truth or lie to find just go check your head. you need some medical attention hahahahha

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Well maybe if u not Put some japanese line in ur novel .. its maybe good fanfic..!!! maybe seeing that japanese line make my eyes hurt like hell XD.. maybe bcz reminds me of my old self

dont mind me I've read about 19 chapter and can't help but ask why didn't you just make it a big crossover world like novel can't help but hate the amount of time the mc dies dont get me wrong the soul boost and all is great but it just leaves a bitter aftertaste to me when I see mc dies so much in novels

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First off their was something wrong grammatically wrong in every paragraph except like 3, did the mc do anything about his father like he said he would cause all I saw was him collecting blackmail, the relationships are a little forced.

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I wonder how it will go and change life differently or stick to the plot?

Hello Author-san des. hehehe thank you for reading this novel. it's my first work. The cover and the character that i did not create are not mine and i do not deserve the credit for it.

It's interesting and confusing at the same time. 😄😄 😄 I don't know maybe it will get better with the new chapters and the readers won't be confused that much. Keep writing author

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