Reviews of Currently Being Rewritten

So, a customary author review. I've seen plenty of authors do this on their work so I thought why the hell not, I'll do the same. Anyway, just want to let you know that updates will be slow, I am sorry about that. My plan is to do three to four chapters and then do a mass update so you get more than a single chapter to read. Hopefully this alright with you all.

So I’m just going to put this here and now, this has a drama tag, if you don’t like drama, don’t fucking read it. It’s as simple as that, there’s going to be drama in it and do you know why? It’s because I’m trying to write realistic characters and news flash, people are dramatic af. If they weren’t, then we wouldn’t have so much shit going on in the real world would we? I don’t like it, but I hate it even more when people complain about a story that has drama in it when it literally has a drama tag in the tags section! If that’s not dramatic in of itself then I don’t know what is.

Writer has put together a beautiful story but the core principle of ruining a major MC of another universe is a bullet that kill surely kill this story. Naruto is as much of OC as it has nothing of common with Naruto we know as it has no chakra and no signature moves of original like 'Rasengan' or 'kage bunshin'. it is just a story that uses names of other franchise to pull viewers, only to disappoint them.

I liked it a lot, it has a nice story and it has a very good development, the personalities of the characters that despite being few are great, the only thing I honestly didn’t like very much is the fact that it’s "Naruto" I mean it’s kind of out of the “Gotham” theme and even "Dc", take the fact that even for real Japan the name "Naruto" is kind of "ridiculous" and even worse if it is in America, personality is different from the "Naruto" we know, it is not bad, in truth is good is like an improved Bakugou, in general I indicate a lot.

so this will be a brief summary why this novel feels more like a scam. in 30 chapters that I have read there is no power from naruto universe no chakra not even martial arts from there even narutos personality is grossly different than the OG. so only the names and looks are from naruto nothing else. as a mainly naruto fan I could confidently say I didn't enjoy this but DC wise its allright. the writing quality is also not bad but kinda annoying with lots of flash backs in tense situations and repeated paragraphs in the same chapter.

Frustration is the word, I'm on Ch 40 and mc naruto has nothing to do with naruto no ninja tech , no chakra, its like author is deceiving the naruto fans to read his fan fiction and its super frustrating to see this ,(author ) bastard why are you using name naruto , spare us and just use other name cause it will not give fucking difference to story and most absurd thing he is depending on a serum for boost at this moment I wanna curse you with all my heart 😡😡 he is f-ing Naruto😡😡😡😡😡😡

Not really sure why authors keep making naruto there mcs. Also the way you’ve done him so far just feels like an OC but i’ve enjoyed the story so far none the less it just really irratates me with the whole Naruto thing...

Will he reach the strenght of the Canon Naruto? Or is this just a OC in DCverse with a name ' Naruto' that only has his admirable traits but not his Chakra Prowess. Just read till chapter 10. Gonna wait till 20+ chapters to read again. Dont want to get cliffhanged. Please do answer my question dear Author-san

I'll be the first to admit that this story is amazing. However the one issue I have with it, and I've only made it to chapter 26 so far, is that you can't have Naruto without the demon fox. Where is my main man Kurama??? I need that mad lad

sometimes I wonder if the protagonist of the work is Naruto from the Naruto universe of ninjas, why has nothing to do with him, and the way he supposedly earns his kurama is that someone did tests with him in a forced laboratory and gave him that power to make him angry at everyone and attack everyone that even when naruto really turns into a bijuu other than that the novel is really good, I recommend reading it

I hope you done take this badly. I love the book but it fustrated me a little because its not really naruto. its just another mc with the dame name. when i clicked this i was like, wow a realistic naruto but all i got was someone named naruto. I love the book but ot fustrated me a little because i didnt get what i thought i would get then i opened this book.

I only have 2 real problems, and they're more personal preference than critical, and therefore I cannot in good faith mar my otherwise boundless enjoyment when reading this, or the review I am writing. As a character that grows up in the slums of Gotham, Naruto acts exactly as you'd expect him to. Unlike 'happy-go-lucky' 'believe this!!' Naruto in Konoha, Gotham's Naruto is far more realistic to someone who has been dealing with all the bad elements of Gotham for years. Frankly, despite seeing many Naruto fanfictions, I quite like this change. Other than that, the story progresses well, with significant and realistic character development. Honestly, I'm very excited to see wherever else this story will go in the future.

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Hope you don’t decide to stop writing this as it seems really interesting to see wheee you will take it from here. Like how you’ve shown that being in Gotham has changed Naruto so he’s not entirely like his canon counterpart, just hope you don’t stray to far from his character.

Really enjoyed what you’ve done so far, can’t wait to see how you develop Naruto from here on out. I especially like how you’ve shown his background with Black Mask and in Gotham. Can’t wait to see where he goes from here.

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is rose in the harem? 200 chapters waiting for them to have romantic development, and then they say something about sibling relationship which is disappointing

really nice story and very interesting i just think the whole "naruto" in gotham is some bs, would have been better if you just made an oc that gets naruto's powers cause this feels like some clickbait

Unrelated question, why do you chop up your chapters on this site? People put 15k words in a chapter to get into the rating,s beca so I know it's possible to write long ones. I'm confused as to why you would chop the chapters into 140 chapters instead of 46 long ones. The only reason I even read your stories on webnovel instead of FF is because of better interaction. It probably has something to do with certain people on this site, hmm? I know that some people moan about not being able to read long chapters, and for the author to shorten them.