this belongs in the fanfic section, just take this story down and reupload it in fanfic section. I hate seeing fanfics in the original section after all fanfics get easy votes with an already established universe whereas original need work from Author and even then they get fewer votes.
MC has knowledge about what is gonna happen and who is dangerous but is so lazy and dimwitted even if he does have an op power he would not know how to use it right if it slapped him
I gave it 1.6 because the timeline is great but the story Nah, The mc is like a side character who is the strongest. I see no path of the story in this, Like what is his goal? It said anti-hero yet he is more of a hero than that wannabe hero, He saves everyone despite knowing all the troubles why? because of fucking absolutely no reason. He said he doesn't want to abuse his powers this just like a wuxia story full of face slapping, ants are trying to kill him then boom they lose. It is fun for MC POV and Author but not for us readers, Imagine reading 10 chapters of people planning to kill MC and ridiculing the MC then 1 chapter of seeing the victory of MC......
I'd say that this is probably the best Marvel fic on this site as far as original content and the story flows pretty well. the only complaint I have is that this isn't finished book that I can binge read
The MC is retarded, the reviews as well. Made the MC to op so the author nerfed him by giving him a half boiled potato for brain, and a god complex, so don't get exited that you finally get to slap thanos or some shit, the MC would probably get confused and slap himself. Other than that you can read it if you have nothing better to do. Don't really recommend tho. Giving two stars for a creative idea, and taking the rest away because of the headache reading this gave me and the time I wasted
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Is this not A crooked man? A marvel Si fanfiction on spacebattles? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff, good stuff Good stuff, Good stuff, good stuff Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff, Good stuff,
Please continue!!!!!
I love that he doesn't just kill and gives creative punishments instead......................................................................
very good story and idea but very bad MC with a very useless brain. iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
I have enjoyed what you have done with the story especially when you finally gave the MC something to be afraid of and a decent method to kill it. I hope to see you continue this story.
Story just ends, no wrap up, no summation, no epilog... it just ends
Good book well written but too SHORT WTF... Why the **** did you stop with a cliffhanger? There's so much more to be done in this book. A whole universe to explore and you just dump the book and call it complete 😠😡🤬
This is really good. I really liked the mass release. But please change it to fan fic section.This is really good. I really liked the mass release. But please change it to fan fic section.
Reveal spoiler
hope stark is gone to jail. hope stark is gone to jail............................................................................................................
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I love it, it's really good with a really op mc ............................................................................................
put this is in fanfic section...good story overall...gitgudgitgudgitgudgitgudgitgudgitgudgitgudgitgudwololololololololololololololololololol
