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Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of Civilizations

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Rise of Civilizations

SeanAcer

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RedeyeRanger_268
RedeyeRanger_268Lv1RedeyeRanger_268

There are many capitalization and punctuation errors in just the first chapter. I hope this story's grammar improves

3yr
SeanAcer
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OMG THANK YOU! i needed comments like these and your the very first one who gave a feedback... thank you ♥

3yr
ChocolatChan
ChocolatChanLv11ChocolatChan

If you want, I can be your editor-ish. Though I don't have the best grammar, I do know some grammar rules to at least flow more easier.

3yr
jffgrd
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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing

3yr
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