Zhanye
Privledged readers? Is holding your loyal readers hostage for more material and Demanding more money when they already are paying 5X~10x what they would pay for a well edited polished hard cover copy in a bookstore Stop gouging our pockets and work on getting a loyal following instead of people who will get to the end of this (The Story line Has potential) and never read anuyhin you write again do to your characher and poor final drafts . I will go out of my way to never read another work by the aithors requiring a full book price every 10 chapters of unedited garbage . Underneith it has potwntial for Sure Polish your work and Sell the book